Reflection on Feedback: The number one piece of feedback I got from my last pitch from everyone was to include the price. Since I have no idea how much it would cost I estimated the price at $200 which is probably a little low, but at least I still have a number to work with. Everyone seems to like the part of the pitch where I talked about phones taking over the world, but I decided to take that out just because it took up a lot of precious time I could have spent better explaining the practicality of the product. I feel like this time in the pitch is better spent especially since it is obvious to the average person that phones are taking over the world.
What I changed: I put the estimated the price in, and took out the anecdote about phones taking over the world for greater focus on the features of the product.
Hello Ethan, I think that you nailed it with this elevator pitch. I do believe the idea that the more you practice and do something, the better it will get. I think you did a great job at explaining your concept. Also, it is good that you learned from the feedback and finally mentioned the price of the product as that will help investors determine the worth of the idea, even though it was an estimate.
ReplyDeleteHello Ethan, I loved your elevator pitch! You proved that the third time is really the charm. I watched you improve your pitch throughout the semester and I am extremely proud of your progress. You were clear and concise and had my attention throughout the entire pitch. You made sure that you relayed the important information about your business to your audience.
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ReplyDeleteI think your pitch was very clear stated and you totally described what your product would be. I think you did a very good job interpreting your feedback and ultimately making this pitch by far your best so far. I think it was very important that you stated your product is a convenient product more than anything. Only final ting would maybe talk slower and the pitch would be perfect, great job.
Hey ethan, very cool elevator pitch, and I really appreciated the amount of personality you included in your pitch. You truly brought your pitch to life and made it more entertaining to watch. You very clear and direct as to what exactly your product was. I have very much enjoyed seeing the progression of your elevator pitches. Overall great job!
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